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I'm doing the paragraph on dairies for our essay (topic #6). My first concrete detail is when Cecily says that dairies are a sensational read on the train. Second is when Cecily is talking about how she write everything down in her diary or else she would forget it. My final detail is when the two girls are comparing diaries while they are trying to figure out who the real Ernest is. Basically, I want to relate all these points back to the three-volume novel and show how they are pretty much the same. For my transition sentence, I'll say that diaries relate to three-volume novels as do the sermons...
Sound good?
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awesome. sounds good. check emmas blog to make sure you dont have the same details
ReplyDeleteSweet. You also need to transition from the three-volume novel into diaries. You could compare how the girls write everything down as if it were a novel or something.
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